Epic win This really made me smile -- you made my little girl look way too beautiful

Thank you very much!

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Aww! I'm really glad you like it!

When you first asked, I was really excited to pick one of your OC's... but it was really hard to choose only one! She was insanely fun to draw!

And, I'd be totally willing to do any art trade or request of your OC's in the future. That was totally cool.

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Yeah, we ought to trade again someday Maybe even have some character cross-overs or something too

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Definitely! I'd be totally up for that. :3

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Dude, you draw OCs like awesome for peeps!! :3

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Thankies
You should request some more of your charries.. I love drawing them peeps.

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Good thing I DID!! -dances about Ronan piccy-

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OOOOOKAY CRITIQUE TIME! -shotdead-

First off, i like the improvement in this. there is a loss for words about the color choice. better shading on the hair really brings it out, but the highlight doesnt appear natural, maybe if your using photoshop you can use the smudge tool to make it appear better.

The clothes have a real improvement to them from before (Your reth pic)and they have clothing folds that stand out, but i still cant see the shading very well. maybe next time, select like a really light blue. it would blend with her hair and work really well with the clothes because shading on white clothes isnt grey, it is usually a very light color that emphasizes something, sometimes the mood.

The arms are drawn really well, but i believe they're too long. The wrists should come down to about crotch level, yours stretch way past that. however, i see a good improvement in fingers and hands.

I love the way the eyes are transparent through the hair. it gives a silky feel to it.

-Aten.

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Once again, a lot of really helpful critiques here! I'll try working on improving my arms and proportions, and continue to work on shading.

Thank you again!

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